We were learning to write the best features about Spring. We were also learning write why we like Spring. I was learning to write a paragraph using a topic sentence, supporting details, and a conclusion.
I found it hard to use different sentence starters in all the sentences because I wanted to use the word Bees in 2 sentences but I couldn't. I also found it hard to choose level 3 vocab.
I found it easy to insert my image to the middle of the flower because the teacher put instructions on one of the slides. I also found it easy to write about the best features about Spring because Spring is one of my favourite seasons.
Next time I will use my online thesaurus more so I can use more level 3 vocab. I will also try to get more yellow in my writing .
Kia ora. My name is Holly and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you told people what your favorite parts of spring are. My favorite part is when you said in your writing “Bees soar through the sky going from flower to flower”. How did you find all of those amazing adjectives?