Onomatopoeia Fireworks Poem

 

 

Onomatopoeia is describing a sound that you hear such as " POW" or "SPLAT".  That was one of our  focuses for our poem. Our learning asset was whai whakaaro\ thinker. 

A few parts were hard for me because finding the right words to rhyme with the words that I wrote in my poem were quite difficult because the sentence fireworks are always fun, you never want it to end,

but you just have to be patient and wait until next year. That sentence didn't rhyme so that kind of let me down in my poem. The easiest parts of being a thinker were adding onomatopoeia in to my poem as well as repeating it at the end of my poem. Next time I need to add better adjectives to describe my poem.

Te Whare Tapa Wha: Pink Shirt Day 2021

 

Te whare tapa wha is the four walls that keep you whare safe. The walls are Taha whanau- Family and social, Taha tinana- physical, Taha Wairua-spiritual, and Taha hinengaro- Mental and emotional. Each wall is called a pou. The whare is you and the four walls are what helps you stay standing and if someone hurts you physically or emotionally your wall will fall down and you have to do what you love tp fix and put it back together.  

Our learning asset was to be a thinker.  That means that you have to think hard about the images that you place in your slide because it has to be the truth about what you believe in, what you do to stay active, how you stay connected with your family, and what makes you happy.

I think that I thought hard about all my images because they match my personality as well as how I think.

Also next time I think I should try to have more thoughts about adding maybe four images because I found it really hard to choose between some of them. 

Ancient Creature

 

 

I was focusing on being a communicator and to share my ideas through writing and trying to add smiles, alliteration, adjectives, verbs and other level four criteria. I had to describe my ancient creature with lots and lots of detail and describing words.

Next time I need to think about more alliteration because I don't think I added quite a lot because like have interest in my writing.